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  1. Posted: September 24, 2020In: SciFi

    Three interwined stories between a group of astronauts in space finding them race against time to find their way home to Earth.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 25, 2020 at 6:15 am

    This logline is a bit vague. Even if there's a group of characters there should be someone who's the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there'd be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective. Next, give them a clear,Read more

    This logline is a bit vague.

    Even if there’s a group of characters there should be someone who’s the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there’d be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective.

    Next, give them a clear, tangible goal, like be the first humans to travel to Planet X, (change to whatever fits) or on a rescue mission to get that one astronaut they left for dead on Mars. (Guess what movie I just re-watched.) They should have a goal/mission.

    Who, or what are trying to stop them from from achieving their goal/mission. I reckon this is “Something disastrous” but it would help if it’s more specific than that.

    Finally what are the stakes, what happens if they fail, and also if there’s a ticking clock, they have limited time to achieve their goal/mission before the disaster. For instance, they have to catch Matt Damon before the stripped down space capsule falls back down to Mars.

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2020In: SciFi

    When it’s scientifically proven that women can reproduce without men, a group of girls thinks of a plan to annihilate the male species for good.

    Sonja Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 10:56 pm

    Okay, one of those "why didn't I think of that?!" - love it!

    Okay, one of those “why didn’t I think of that?!” – love it!

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2020In: SciFi

    A psychologist meets a 12-year old girl who claims to have strange memories, one of them being the psychologist getting murdered. But when he realizes these memories are actually visions of the future, he must prevent his own murder.

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    NathanLangenheim Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 10:56 pm

    Good and interesting story, I would watch this movie! The logline feels a bit long though. Is it possible to reduce to just one sentence?

    Good and interesting story, I would watch this movie! The logline feels a bit long though. Is it possible to reduce to just one sentence?

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