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When tragedy befalls a prehistoric teen, he must join forces with a mysterious ally to unite humanity and overcome an extraterrestrial threat that could end all life on earth.
The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That's where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has "domesticated" feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves. And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren't complaining, got a good deal out of the the arRead more
The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That’s where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has “domesticated” feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves.
And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren’t complaining, got a good deal out of the the arrangement, why *must* homo sapiens rebel?
And tragedy is a vague term. It could refer to any number of unhappy events. And in a logline, a word that could refer to any number of things means nothing at all.
Be specific.
See lessBrutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.
I just can't see a Christ type being, being vengeful and a killer. You don't raise to that level of consciousness by being a crazy killing person...then half of humanity would be "Christ the Lord" energies. Christ consciousness is about love and regardless of how you justify this by some bible phrasRead more
I just can’t see a Christ type being, being vengeful and a killer. You don’t raise to that level of consciousness by being a crazy killing person…then half of humanity would be “Christ the Lord” energies. Christ consciousness is about love and regardless of how you justify this by some bible phrase, it’s just not true that an evolved being would be a killing machine. It’s HARDER TO BE LOVING, so all your saying is some dude who was wrong comes back and does what he wanted to do his whole life because he wasn’t respected. Feels childish not Christlike.
See lessA homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.
My sentence structure had too many and's so I wrote a more concise sentence
My sentence structure had too many and’s so I wrote a more concise sentence
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