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?After a botched clinical trial, an out of work sketch artist with synesthesia begins to see through time, which leads to a turbulent partnership with an alcoholic Private Investigator to help solve existing crimes and prevent new ones.? A 1 Hour Drama ? Title ?Savant? or ?Seer? , TBD.
I think the "botched clinical trial" works very well for a destitute man, just trying to earn the $15 or whatever for participating so he can eat.? I agree with not excluding taste and smell.? Maybe mention "his five senses" instead of listing them.? I guess maybe the only thing that's missing fromRead more
I think the “botched clinical trial” works very well for a destitute man, just trying to earn the $15 or whatever for participating so he can eat.? I agree with not excluding taste and smell.? Maybe mention “his five senses” instead of listing them.? I guess maybe the only thing that’s missing from this logline is… where is the conflict/danger?? Sounds like something good happens out of bad, and we just watch him do great things with it.? I honestly don’t know if it would help because you probably have enough of a hook, but I think it’s worth considering what you might tweak if you wanted to add that.
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I think what's missing here is some insight on what the biologist's disposition is to the task at hand.? Is the biologist opposed in any way to killing, but he's being coerced in some way, or convinced that this is necessary?? Is he up for it, but some activists want to stop him? Something else to cRead more
I think what’s missing here is some insight on what the biologist’s disposition is to the task at hand.? Is the biologist opposed in any way to killing, but he’s being coerced in some way, or convinced that this is necessary?? Is he up for it, but some activists want to stop him?
Something else to consider, is maybe this is just part of the plot.? I think pretty common is where the “policy enforcer” comes across a target that he doesn’t want to kill and/or gets targeted himself.? It’s a tried and true structure that might work well for this.
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I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.
I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.
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