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I think what's missing here is some insight on what the biologist's disposition is to the task at hand.? Is the biologist opposed in any way to killing, but he's being coerced in some way, or convinced that this is necessary?? Is he up for it, but some activists want to stop him? Something else to cRead more
I think what’s missing here is some insight on what the biologist’s disposition is to the task at hand.? Is the biologist opposed in any way to killing, but he’s being coerced in some way, or convinced that this is necessary?? Is he up for it, but some activists want to stop him?
Something else to consider, is maybe this is just part of the plot.? I think pretty common is where the “policy enforcer” comes across a target that he doesn’t want to kill and/or gets targeted himself.? It’s a tried and true structure that might work well for this.
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I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.
I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.
See lessCrashed on a faraway planet with retrograde amnesia, a young, ingenious but highly schizophrenic astronaut strives to rebuild her spacecraft while endeavoring to outwit a manipulative, shape-shifting alien whose sole impetus is to repopulate by abusing her as a host.
If she has progressive memory loss, but can still fix the spacecraft, does that imply that the memory loss isn't pivotal to her fate?? In a? logline a cognitive defect is only worth mentioning if it puts the attainment of her objective goal in jeopardy.?? So, for the purpose of the plot, why MUST shRead more
If she has progressive memory loss, but can still fix the spacecraft, does that imply that the memory loss isn’t pivotal to her fate?? In a? logline a cognitive defect is only worth mentioning if it puts the attainment of her objective goal in jeopardy.?? So, for the purpose of the plot, why MUST she have progressive memory loss?
It seems you’ve given the character two major tasks: 1] fix the spacecraft; 2] fend off the alien.? Which task is primary, going to get more screen time?
And if she fends off the alien, but can’t fix the spacecraft is she stranded on the planet, doomed to die anyway?
What is the story really and singularly about?? What is the overarching theme that organizes the narrative?
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