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When sinister agents abduct him and his mother, an exceptionally gifted but socially isolated Indian teen discovers that he was genetically engineered for a dark purpose and must choose to either embrace that purpose or fight back on behalf of humanity.
If you had to carve this down, it would be... When his mother is abducted by sinister agents, a teenage loner must fight back on behalf of humanity. - So we're missing some stakes/what happens if he doesn't fight back. Those guys above are right. I think you need to write down a few pages on your thRead more
If you had to carve this down, it would be…
When his mother is abducted by sinister agents, a teenage loner must fight back on behalf of humanity.
– So we’re missing some stakes/what happens if he doesn’t fight back.
Those guys above are right. I think you need to write down a few pages on your thing, what it’s about, what will or could happen. It will give you a better understanding of what’s going on.
After that the logline will be a lot more precise and specific. You’ll be able to carve it down – and then it will look really fucking good.
Good luck.
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In a story, you have a lead character Something happens to that lead character This causes the lead character to have a goal. However, achieving that goal isn't easy because something stands in the lead character's way. Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
In a story, you have a lead character
Something happens to that lead character
This causes the lead character to have a goal.
However, achieving that goal isn’t easy because something stands in the lead character’s way.
Who is the lead character?
What do they want?
What is standing in their way?
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