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  1. Posted: June 30, 2019In: SciFi

    Billions of refugees seek shelter from deadly weather events, antibiotics have lost their potency, nations wage wars over land and water, and activists not opposed to violence towards humans try to save animals from extinction.

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    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on October 23, 2019 at 7:54 pm

    Surely the best person to fly this thing is not a race car driver but an astronaut... trained in this kinda thing. When the space programme started, they didn't choose people who were just used to travelling at speed. They chose people who were intelligent and exceptional pilots... key word is pilotRead more

    Surely the best person to fly this thing is not a race car driver but an astronaut… trained in this kinda thing. When the space programme started, they didn’t choose people who were just used to travelling at speed. They chose people who were intelligent and exceptional pilots… key word is pilots. Just because the driver is used to going fast doesn’t mean he can fly, so why would anyone think he was a better choice than the leading astronaut at that time? Someone who can fly and is also used to speed and has had psychological training to deal with such a situation. A race car driver just makes no sense to me at all.

    You’re telling us they must induce a second ice-age… but why? To what end. That’s the goal. Why does a second ice age need to be induced bearing in mind that most plants and animals on earth will die?!

    I stand by my previous thoughts on light speed travel. If light speed is possible, then everything changes. Everything is possible at that point unless you’re adding to what we currently know about light speed travel. If that’s the case, we NEED that information to understand how this could work.

    I think the idea that we will all be destroyed by Mother Nature is a good inciting incident BUT what your characters seem to do about it makes very little sense right now. There needs to be something that grounds it in reality even if it is a SciFi. How would light speed travel induce an ice age??

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  2. Posted: May 31, 2019In: SciFi

    A young aspiring musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He learns the rich and famous are given strange powers for their so called accomplishments.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on October 20, 2019 at 9:45 pm

    LOGLINE UPDATE #3: A hip-hop musician contends in a friendly competition between celebrities, over who will collect eight billion fans first and gain enough supernatural power to bring death to every one of their followers.

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    A hip-hop musician contends in a friendly competition between celebrities, over who will collect eight billion fans first and gain enough supernatural power to bring death to every one of their followers.

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2019In: SciFi

    Borrowed Time

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 20, 2019 at 12:38 pm

    Agreed with the above. This is interesting. The concept needs conflict, and simply avoiding the enforcers doesn't sound very enticing. More to the point, what is his goal? Keep avoiding them? Until when? What's the endpoint? What if he decides to actively stop the system of death? This way you put hRead more

    Agreed with the above. This is interesting.

    The concept needs conflict, and simply avoiding the enforcers doesn’t sound very enticing. More to the point, what is his goal? Keep avoiding them? Until when? What’s the endpoint?

    What if he decides to actively stop the system of death? This way you put him on a path to clash with the big scary folk.

    How about:
    After avoiding his demise in a world of predetermined deaths, a man must fight the system that dictates when people’s time is up.

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