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(3rd revision) When a vigilante hacker maliciously deploys a power-hungry biotech corporation?s untested experimental software and discovers it capable of manipulating reality to their advantage, she must exploit the resulting bugs, to stop them, before the world is at their mercy.
Who is the antagonist, the Malicious hacker or the biotech corporation?In other words, is your lead character trying to stop the Hacker or trying to stop the company?
Who is the antagonist, the Malicious hacker or the biotech corporation?
In other words, is your lead character trying to stop the Hacker or trying to stop the company?
See lessA na?ve teenager takes a job as an interstellar mailman, to move to a paradise planet. On the job, he gets chased by foreign agents and assassins and discovers his paradise isn’t as good as it sounds
It sounds like a juicy sci-fi comedy. Well done! Do consider the previous comments for fixing the story, but I love the "Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy" or "Space Quest" feel.
It sounds like a juicy sci-fi comedy. Well done! Do consider the previous comments for fixing the story, but I love the “Hitchiker’s Guide to the Galaxy” or “Space Quest” feel.
See lessResentful towards his prey and questioning his abilities ever since the death of his protege, a hunter pursues a family protecting a monster they believe to be their deceased matriarch.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
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