1. Posted: September 12, 2022In:

    A high school student moves with her mother, her grandmother and her two aunts, she discovers that they and other people around her as disguised as aliens.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck

    Hi tony18,

    This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
    1- Correcting grammar/spelling
    2- Use the logline “generator”
    and/or
    3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2022In:

    An independent inventor develops the first faster-than-light drive to take humanity to the stars, usurping a solar system of greedy corporations and vengeful governments.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Hallucigenia, Here's how I understood the story so far based on your loglines: A man invents a faster-than-light vehicle to transport humans to the stars and becomes a commercial threat to the government-supported corporation that wants him out no matter how. I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Hallucigenia,

    Here’s how I understood the story so far based on your loglines:

    A man invents a faster-than-light vehicle to transport humans to the stars and becomes a commercial threat to the government-supported corporation that wants him out no matter how.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In:

    When they accidentally pick up an unknown and hostile alien life form in space, third officer Ellen Ripley and her crew must destroy it before it kills everyone on board.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Rodallex, "A female captain and her astronaut crew must destroy a strange and vicious alien creature they unintentionally picked up before it kills everyone onboard." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Rodallex,

    “A female captain and her astronaut crew must destroy a strange and vicious alien creature they unintentionally picked up before it kills everyone onboard.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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