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  1. Posted: March 27, 2019In: SciFi

    When the UK’s top entrepreneur kills his whole family then commits suicide, a washed-up cop, grieving widow and new age guru must team up to find out what’s causing this sudden epidemic of high profile bloody events.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 27, 2019 at 9:14 pm

    I? also like Richiev's take because it focuses on a specific protagonist.? The protagonist's actions are clearly motivated:? it's personal.? She has? very personal stakes in the case.? Whereas the original version just throws it out there that a trio MUST? investigate the problem.? Well, why MUST thRead more

    I? also like Richiev’s take because it focuses on a specific protagonist.? The protagonist’s actions are clearly motivated:? it’s personal.? She has? very personal stakes in the case.? Whereas the original version just throws it out there that a trio MUST? investigate the problem.? Well, why MUST they get involved?? Why would? 3 disparate characters team up? over a murder-suicide?? What’s their motivation?? What skin do they have in the game?

    And not only is it easier for an audience to get involved in the story through one person ‘s point of view rather than several, as mikepedley85 noted, but it is also often easier to sell the script.

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  2. Posted: March 25, 2019In: SciFi

    Ms. RAMBO and her female ET drinking buddy rescue PASSENGERS from starving evil ETs and then meets THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (of 1951).

    Steve Logliner
    Added an answer on March 25, 2019 at 2:54 am

    Your statement:?When nations start nuking each other, a friendly ET disguised as human must prevent World War III or loose the only compatible planet left in the universe?My question:? When nations start nuking each other, isn't that too late for any ET to prevent WW3?I think the confusion comes myRead more

    Your statement:

    ?When nations start nuking each other, a friendly ET disguised as human must prevent World War III or loose the only compatible planet left in the universe?

    My question:? When nations start nuking each other, isn’t that too late for any ET to prevent WW3?

    I think the confusion comes my use of the word “STOP”; I should have used “PREVENT” instead.

    Thanks for your views, much appreciated.

    Steve

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2019In: SciFi

    Jesus Christ returns to earth with a sword, living under an alias, he does battle with the Devil to save his daughter’s soul.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on March 15, 2019 at 9:05 am

    Contact me, caleb.danielt@gmail.com?I believe we can work together as I've had a similar story in the making. But here's my take - it can either be quite comedic, or serious.?"When Jesus of Nazareth returns to Earth, completely unrecognizable, he recruits his elect from our modern new world to folloRead more

    Contact me, caleb.danielt@gmail.com?I believe we can work together as I’ve had a similar story in the making. But here’s my take – it can either be quite comedic, or serious.

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    “When Jesus of Nazareth returns to Earth, completely unrecognizable, he recruits his elect from our modern new world to follow him into Tel Megiddo to finally untangle mankind from an AI-led and dependent “new world”.

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