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  1. Posted: July 13, 2018In: SciFi

    Adar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth?s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.

    t3xx3r Logliner
    Added an answer on October 12, 2018 at 6:28 am

    Nice logline but got several questions. 1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him? 2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them? 3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer to intergalactic prime directive or laws?

    Nice logline but got several questions.

    1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him?
    2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them?
    3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer to intergalactic prime directive or laws?

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  2. Posted: October 7, 2018In: SciFi

    A space marine on shore leave must race to rescue a scientist from enemy insurgents, or the scientist’s death or abduction could set off a doomsday weapon, killing billions.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on October 10, 2018 at 3:55 am

    Thank you. They use word count on the site. During November you input how many words you've written so far, and you get to see your progress graphically. I don't remember exactly, but they recommend you write 1667 words per day, or something thereabout, to make it to precisely 50K words at the end oRead more

    Thank you.

    They use word count on the site. During November you input how many words you’ve written so far, and you get to see your progress graphically. I don’t remember exactly, but they recommend you write 1667 words per day, or something thereabout, to make it to precisely 50K words at the end of the month. I usually aim to overshoot, to stay on the “safe” side.

    For structure and planning, I use my take on the Save the Cat! By Blake Snyder. I start by filling out a beat sheet, which I import into Scrivener and then split into separate documents until I end up with 40 of them, and plan what will happen in each scene. I also do some?planning in Aeon Timeline.
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  3. Posted: September 11, 2018In: SciFi

    When a vengeful alien threatens to destroy Earth, a reluctant young drifter must live up to his father’s reputation as a Starfleet Captain and stop the invasion.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 15, 2018 at 6:07 am

    It has clear objective and an evident inner motivation (the successful, glorious father, etc.). I like it and I think it works. Perhaps a little more specific info on the alien? Is it an "alien spaceship" or a whole "alien fleet?" Perhaps the drifter has to organise the Earth's fleet, to deal with aRead more

    It has clear objective and an evident inner motivation (the successful, glorious father, etc.). I like it and I think it works.

    Perhaps a little more specific info on the alien? Is it an “alien spaceship” or a whole “alien fleet?” Perhaps the drifter has to organise the Earth’s fleet, to deal with an invasion of a larger scale.

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