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After losing his captcha, a tone deaf scientist must prove himself human in a music duel, or slave his life in an AI camp
I think, if you go ahead with this project, it would be good to get a consultant in. An expert on current AI with a good prognosis of how they?ll work in the future. With my limited understanding of this kind of science, I wouls assume, what they need to measure, is comprehension beyond what a machiRead more
I think, if you go ahead with this project, it would be good to get a consultant in. An expert on current AI with a good prognosis of how they?ll work in the future. With my limited understanding of this kind of science, I wouls assume, what they need to measure, is comprehension beyond what a machine can understand and in fact being flawed. A non artificial or purely randomized pattern of flawdness so to speak. Also, may, the ability to create something that a human can appreciate as harmonious better than an AI… which i where his tone deafness would make things interesting. (I?m better at getting characters into trouble than out lol)
Just wondering, is the AI in your world self-conscious? Would that be a game changer? Maybe an additional inner-journey or even deciding to free all those artificial ?people??
See lessA chosen earth gatekeeper must stay alive for 3 hours while the worlds mate,the mate open the gates to both worlds ,aliens seize the opportunity to invade earth,his death keeps the gate open forever and it means death for all mankind.
"When a portal is opened between our world and the world of a dark alien race, a gatekeeper has three hours to destroy the alien army and seal the gate for another thousand years."
“When a portal is opened between our world and the world of a dark alien race, a gatekeeper has three hours to destroy the alien army and seal the gate for another thousand years.”
See lessAfter the catastrophic earthquakes around the world, a seismologist must uncover the reason behind the mysterious stoppage of his time at 2:00 AM, else he remains in the past.
It is good ashes. But the problem here is the character's conflict. It is only exterior.Not long ago I attended a screenwriting workshop and a man came up to describe his idea: A man discovers that the events occurring in his life have already occurred in someone else's. After finding out that the sRead more
It is good ashes. But the problem here is the character’s conflict. It is only exterior.
Not long ago I attended a screenwriting workshop and a man came up to describe his idea: A man discovers that the events occurring in his life have already occurred in someone else’s. After finding out that the said man is dead, he must uncover the mystery connection and survive.
The above plot is interesting, and the way writer described was more interesting but he was put down immediately by the head speaker as the character did not have any inner conflict.? An inner conflict makes your? character connect to the audience.?What is unique about your character that will connect the audience and drive them with his story?
I also would suggest you a non-linear approach to this. Why?
To make the audience relatable to your story’s arc. Think Batman Begins by Christopher Nolan. He unveils Bruce with a story taking place in two different situations. The?inner conflict?is easily understood.
You can show first few situations of his troubled hours and at the same time unveil the character with what just happened a few days/weeks ago that connects his troubled hours. Also adapting such approach will make you free to not rely on other people who have stopped. You can rely on science and your character.
I think the 2:00 PM time does not need to be mentioned in logline: ‘In a catastrophic earthquake the TIME stops for a volatile seismologist, he must find a way for not getting left behind in the past.’
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