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RE-EDIT Escapees from a prison planet carrying proof of atrocities committed by the Corporation crash into an outpost over Jupiter. Pursued by the head of security of the prison they have half an hour to reach the communication room and alert Earth before the outpost plummets into the atmosphere.
"Pursued by prison security, the teenage escapee must lead other prisoners to the communication room with vital corporate secret, before the outpost crashes into earth" 25 words and single protagonist with clear goal However, I'm still unclear about the plot outpost......prison planet.....atrocitiesRead more
“Pursued by prison security, the teenage escapee must lead other prisoners to the communication room with vital corporate secret, before the outpost crashes into earth”
25 words and single protagonist with clear goal
However, I’m still unclear about the plot
See lessoutpost……prison planet…..atrocities(maybe being prisoner they deserve it??)….
A crew of escaped prisoners crash into a relay station over Jupiter carrying evidence of torture and murder. They must fight their way to the communication room to tell earth of these corporate crimes before the outpost burns.
When their outpost is in the verge of boom boom boom, their immediate goal "to tell earth of these corporate crimes" seems selfish...
When their outpost is in the verge of boom boom boom, their immediate goal “to tell earth of these corporate crimes” seems selfish…
See lessIn 2148, After the attack of a strange virus to human genetics, a blind man, and a handicapped woman teams up to lead an army against immunes to bring justice.
I think it could benefit from singular protagonist and a clear goal- "After a genetic war leaves the less privileged with irreversible physical damage, a blind boxer leads other victims to obtain the vaccine supply for newborns, hoarded by the immuned rich" Beware!! it's an overused premise
I think it could benefit from singular protagonist and a clear goal-
“After a genetic war leaves the less privileged with irreversible physical damage, a blind boxer leads other victims to obtain the vaccine supply for newborns, hoarded by the immuned rich”
Beware!! it’s an overused premise
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