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Revised: When a bumbling alien pollutes the timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history, and prevent the apocalypse? again!
I think this is getting close. ?I think you can cut "well-intentioned" because his adopted human family means he's got to be fairly friendly. ?bumbling is enough. So this is sci-fi comedy I take it? ?Not sure pollute is the right word, but close. When a bumbling ?alien pollutes our timeline, he andRead more
I think this is getting close. ?I think you can cut “well-intentioned” because his adopted human family means he’s got to be fairly friendly. ?bumbling is enough. So this is sci-fi comedy I take it? ?Not sure pollute is the right word, but close.
When a bumbling ?alien pollutes our timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history to prevent the apocalypse? again!
See lessWhen bionic rivals–hired to reset the server–discover two halves of it in each other, they engage until one of them lives to receive the pay
I still don't quite understand the concept, even with Take II. ?What is so important about this server? ?We may need to have more context. ?Is this server made by the same company who made them or employs them? ?Is this server important to their world and why have they been hired to reset it? ?ThereRead more
I still don’t quite understand the concept, even with Take II. ?What is so important about this server? ?We may need to have more context. ?Is this server made by the same company who made them or employs them? ?Is this server important to their world and why have they been hired to reset it? ?There is potential here, I htink the story needs refining. ?This is a brother/twin/family saga essentially? ?Those emotional stakes need to be in the pitch logline.
See lessTrapped in his outer body experience, a pro lucid dreamer cooperates with his skeptic rivals to wake up before the league organizer reaps their awareness.
Would you consider an extra line for the world?s setup? Here?s a random attempt: In a lucid-dreaming competition, the commonly despised champion must convince his competitors to cooperate with him to escape the imaginary world created by the game-master, holding their consciousness ransom.
Would you consider an extra line for the world?s setup?
Here?s a random attempt:
In a lucid-dreaming competition, the commonly despised champion must convince his competitors to cooperate with him to escape the imaginary world created by the game-master, holding their consciousness ransom.
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