1. Posted: March 22, 2018In:

    Revised: After her children are taken, on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother must reclaim them, by undergoing a life-threatening VR therapy: defeating embodiments of her demons in simulated combat.

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    dpg Singularity

    >>>on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother What dramatic purpose is served by her being "holier-than-thou"?? She's already mentally ill.? Isn't that enough?

    >>>on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother

    What dramatic purpose is served by her being “holier-than-thou”?? She’s already mentally ill.? Isn’t that enough?

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2018In:

    When a corporate party is interrupted by overdosed terrorists, a party member races against the clock to save the others and the building before going blind and losing the building in an explosion that could wipe out half the city and the tracks of the terrorists.

    Jessie Samurai

    Ok, fair enough. How about something like this? When a corporate party is violently disrupted by armed drunks, a timid employee, left for dead, must find reluctant allies and the courage to fight back, before losing his mind to the drug keeping him alive.

    Ok, fair enough.

    How about something like this?

    When a corporate party is violently disrupted by armed drunks, a timid employee, left for dead, must find reluctant allies and the courage to fight back, before losing his mind to the drug keeping him alive.

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  3. Posted: March 22, 2018In:

    An alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    This is a run of the mill criticism of colonialisation relocated to an alien plant. "Evil" humans colonise and oppress, native fights back - there have been so many stories told about this to date, aside from the alien, I don't see how this brings anything new to the table. What does the alien do thRead more

    This is a run of the mill criticism of colonialisation relocated to an alien plant. “Evil” humans colonise and oppress, native fights back – there have been so many stories told about this to date, aside from the alien, I don’t see how this brings anything new to the table. What does the alien do that makes his actions interesting? How does he plan on freeing his people? Will there be a revolt?

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