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When his memories of his late family are erased by the corrupt head of a tech company, a memory forger must use his skills to extract intel from a rival firm’s lead scientist to get them back.
>>>>it would more emotional if he were to received a message telling him that his father has finally died, but he can?t remember him Good idea for the inciting incident. When the bad guy wipes his memory -- that's backstory.? It isn't properly an inciting incident because it doesn't inciRead more
>>>>it would more emotional if he were to received a message telling him that his father has finally died, but he can?t remember him
Good idea for the inciting incident.
When the bad guy wipes his memory — that’s backstory.? It isn’t properly an inciting incident because it doesn’t incite the protagonist to action,? The inciting incident is whatever happens that makes him realize he has? no memory of his parents.
I see one problem with premise, however.? The protagonist lives in a society, a world where everyone has families, family connections, family,, family connections — it’s the homo sapien way.? How credible is it that he would not immediately wonder why he is the only one with no memories of every having a family. Wouldn’t it be better if the bad guy swaps out authentic memories with false ones — implants bogus memories?? (Like Rachel in “Blade Runner”)
And then, he discovers intel about his real family….
See lessIn a society of conscious machines tasked with spreading the human race to new planets, a philosophical robot is sent to investigate the ghost-ship remnant of a previous (non-conscious) mission, but soon finds themselves facing a growing zombie-robot army that threatens both society and mission.
When an android sent to investigate the disappearance of a colonisation space ship discovers an armada of self replicating robots, he must stop the invasion before they reach earth. I changed the zombie robot to self replicating robot, but body snatcher could also do the trick. Also I made your protRead more
When an android sent to investigate the disappearance of a colonisation space ship discovers an armada of self replicating robots, he must stop the invasion before they reach earth.
See lessI changed the zombie robot to self replicating robot, but body snatcher could also do the trick.
Also I made your protagonist an android as it sound better than philosophical robot or synthetic or AI.
After he suffers a head injury, a mentally unstable man starts remembering and perceiving reality differently and must piece together that is real and what’s fake to find and stop those affecting reality
Agreed with DPG. Best you specify the danger these bad guys are posing. Also, if you could connect the bad guys to the original head injury it would help. What if he was attacked by a team of specialists etc... now he must find and stop them but in order to do so, he has to decipher real from imaginRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Best you specify the danger these bad guys are posing. Also, if you could connect the bad guys to the original head injury it would help. What if he was attacked by a team of specialists etc… now he must find and stop them but in order to do so, he has to decipher real from imaginary.
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