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At 80 words the sentence is far too long to be evaluated as a logline.? Most of the text is devoted to convoluted? backstory information instead of a clear, concise? statement of the story moving forward from an inciting incident.IOW: after all is said,? nothing is done.? There is no plot.Please revRead more
At 80 words the sentence is far too long to be evaluated as a logline.? Most of the text is devoted to convoluted? backstory information instead of a clear, concise? statement of the story moving forward from an inciting incident.
IOW: after all is said,? nothing is done.? There is no plot.
Please review the basic plot elements outlined under “Our Formula”.?
See lessWhen a top notch agent finds a drug that is killing people, she enlists the help of her lazy, post war, pension living boyfriend to aid her in finding out how to stop the drug before an entire city is wiped out.
The agency for me isn?t the issue. What forces her outside the agency is the story. Is it corrupt, are people in the agency involved or has she been framed?
The agency for me isn?t the issue. What forces her outside the agency is the story. Is it corrupt, are people in the agency involved or has she been framed?
See lessA Dissociate Identity Disorder sufferer discovers his alternate personalities are actually various versions of himself existing in different timelines and must use his connection to them to help them prevent a disturbed alternate from finding and killing the original version of himself, which would erase them all.
"When he discovers the visions he sees are versions of himself from alternate realities, a confused mental patient must team with his gay self, and his rebellious self, to take down the psychotic who wants to be the only persona left standing."
“When he discovers the visions he sees are versions of himself from alternate realities, a confused mental patient must team with his gay self, and his rebellious self, to take down the psychotic who wants to be the only persona left standing.”
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