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Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.
Having travelled to the future and seen the end of humanity, a misanthropic scientist has one year to change events that lead to world war 3. misanthropic seem to be a better and shorter description than increasingly pessimistic. the fact he is in simulated loop is just an artefact of the plot, so IRead more
Having travelled to the future and seen the end of humanity, a misanthropic scientist has one year to change events that lead to world war 3.
misanthropic seem to be a better and shorter description than increasingly pessimistic.
the fact he is in simulated loop is just an artefact of the plot, so I left it out of the Logline.
The original Logline lead me to more questions:
See lessis he really trapped in the simulation?
if it is the loop what is the time constraint?
what and who is the antagonist?
When he meets a cyborg who comes from an earth invaded by alien body snatchers, a hardened sheriff must save his family and stop the body snatchers before their invasion of earth.
Agree with Foxtrot25.? The story seems to be a cloning of bodies and parts from other films.? I don't see a fresh, original concept here.
Agree with Foxtrot25.? The story seems to be a cloning of bodies and parts from other films.? I don’t see a fresh, original concept here.
See lessAn orphan developing strange powers is unaware that an alien force needs to destroy her if they are to succeed in invading Earth
Make your protagonist active!! Right now you have the orphan in a fairly passive spot. The story should be about what she has to do in order to overcome danger
Make your protagonist active!! Right now you have the orphan in a fairly passive spot. The story should be about what she has to do in order to overcome danger
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