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  1. Posted: February 2, 2018In: SciFi

    In a futuristic crime-free world rendered paralyzed by digital addiction, an alcoholic policeman, repurposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum social media popularity, must unravel the mystery behind his daughter?s kidnapping

    maxzorin Logliner
    Added an answer on February 2, 2018 at 10:15 pm

    This is great feedback... and when to think of it, you're right... the kidnapping angle doesn't fit all that much with the setting.? I drew some inspiration from a mix of Fahrenheit 451, Logan's Run and The Men Who Knew Too Much... I'll come up with a better conflict an circle back...?Thanks again fRead more

    This is great feedback… and when to think of it, you’re right… the kidnapping angle doesn’t fit all that much with the setting.? I drew some inspiration from a mix of Fahrenheit 451, Logan’s Run and The Men Who Knew Too Much… I’ll come up with a better conflict an circle back…?Thanks again for your help.

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2018In: SciFi

    When the wife of jack suspecting her husband cheated on her , she put up for Humanoid robot and zap him if he fall

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    Added an answer on January 30, 2018 at 11:41 am

    I can see a good comedy with the reversal of the role. The bad guy is the bossy wife who wants to get away from paying alimony by tempting the husband. The unexpected twist is that the honey trap robot falls for the kind husband, but by programming (invented fourth law of robotics, a robot can't revRead more

    I can see a good comedy with the reversal of the role. The bad guy is the bossy wife who wants to get away from paying alimony by tempting the husband. The unexpected twist is that the honey trap robot falls for the kind husband, but by programming (invented fourth law of robotics, a robot can’t reveal secret from its owner) she can’t reveal the dastardly plan.

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  3. Posted: January 15, 2018In: SciFi

    When an assassin whose memories are erased after every hit falls in love with his latest target, he must find who wants her dead to get the contract cancelled, but doing so will trigger his next memory reboot.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 16, 2018 at 2:25 pm

    Golly, I just hate the use of comma training a logline. Almost seems lazy to me.

    Golly, I just hate the use of comma training a logline. Almost seems lazy to me.

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