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An orphan developing strange powers is unaware that an alien force needs to destroy her if they are to succeed in invading Earth
Make your protagonist active!! Right now you have the orphan in a fairly passive spot. The story should be about what she has to do in order to overcome danger
Make your protagonist active!! Right now you have the orphan in a fairly passive spot. The story should be about what she has to do in order to overcome danger
See lessIn a futuristic crime-free world rendered paralyzed by digital addiction, an alcoholic policeman, repurposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum social media popularity, must unravel the mystery behind his daughter?s kidnapping
This is great feedback... and when to think of it, you're right... the kidnapping angle doesn't fit all that much with the setting.? I drew some inspiration from a mix of Fahrenheit 451, Logan's Run and The Men Who Knew Too Much... I'll come up with a better conflict an circle back...?Thanks again fRead more
This is great feedback… and when to think of it, you’re right… the kidnapping angle doesn’t fit all that much with the setting.? I drew some inspiration from a mix of Fahrenheit 451, Logan’s Run and The Men Who Knew Too Much… I’ll come up with a better conflict an circle back…?Thanks again for your help.
See lessWhen the wife of jack suspecting her husband cheated on her , she put up for Humanoid robot and zap him if he fall
I can see a good comedy with the reversal of the role. The bad guy is the bossy wife who wants to get away from paying alimony by tempting the husband. The unexpected twist is that the honey trap robot falls for the kind husband, but by programming (invented fourth law of robotics, a robot can't revRead more
I can see a good comedy with the reversal of the role. The bad guy is the bossy wife who wants to get away from paying alimony by tempting the husband. The unexpected twist is that the honey trap robot falls for the kind husband, but by programming (invented fourth law of robotics, a robot can’t reveal secret from its owner) she can’t reveal the dastardly plan.
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