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When her plants succumb to a disease, a mute girl, haunted by visions, must find resistant seeds in a violent post-apocalyptic world.
In a world dying of famine because of genetic engineering run amuck? -- that seems to be the set up, the initial dramatic problem. (12 words)>>>They are basing their future society on GMO everything, and unleashed the crop destroying disease themselves.Unintentionally or intentionally?If itRead more
In a world dying of famine because of genetic engineering run amuck? — that seems to be the set up, the initial dramatic problem. (12 words)
>>>They are basing their future society on GMO everything, and unleashed the crop destroying disease themselves.
Unintentionally or intentionally?
If it’s “GMO everything” that includes the human genome, right?? And if so,? then isn’t there a bigger issue at stake here:? eugenics, genetically engineering? “better” humans?
What is the story really about?? (The decline of genetic diversity in crops predates GMO by decades.? GMO is a complication of the problem — not the cause.)
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I, like DPG, can't get a clear grasp on the plot from the logline. After reading your explanation, it's a bit easier to understand what you're trying to do in terms of a premise - a time loop that threatens to undermine the integrity of space-time. However, loglines are used to describe plots and thRead more
I, like DPG, can’t get a clear grasp on the plot from the logline. After reading your explanation, it’s a bit easier to understand what you’re trying to do in terms of a premise – a time loop that threatens to undermine the integrity of space-time. However, loglines are used to describe plots and that’s still unclear.
What specifically does the MC want to achieve by the end of the story and how will he go about achieving it? In other words, what are the time cops threatening to do to him?
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Good point raised by DPG, if you look at Back to the Future the stakes were the MC's very existence. In this case, it's just rejigging a few facts, could you somehow connect that to a life and death stake for the MC?
Good point raised by DPG, if you look at Back to the Future the stakes were the MC’s very existence. In this case, it’s just rejigging a few facts, could you somehow connect that to a life and death stake for the MC?
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