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  1. Posted: June 8, 2020In: Short Film

    Jinn returns home, confident he can save his daughter’s soul and bring her back to life, but at the cost of his sanity. [v2] [Short Film] [ Dark Fantasy] [Horror]

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2020 at 8:21 am

    Also you should leave out v2 , short film and dark fantasy horror.  Instead of Jinn maybe dad..?

    Also you should leave out v2 , short film and dark fantasy horror.  Instead of Jinn maybe dad..?

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  2. Posted: June 7, 2020In: Short Film

    Hey guys, I shot a short film and need a little help on my logline. It’s been bothering me for months! It’s a romantic comedy. Short film. Do any of you have any suggestions on cleaning it up? Would love any help I could get. Thanks guys. “After burying themselves in their work and away from their friends, Two broken-hearted Twenty somethings are taken for a night out by their respective friends, only to cross paths over a game of pool, and falling for each other in the process.”

    savinh0 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 8:19 am

    Great work, Richiev! I like your new version "...over a game of pool with emotional stakes higher than the winning shot." It raises the stakes quite literally and it also adds a mysterious flavour to your romantic story. Are you going to shoot the film by yourself? Well, your logline is working now!

    Great work, Richiev!

    I like your new version “…over a game of pool with emotional stakes higher than the winning shot.”

    It raises the stakes quite literally and it also adds a mysterious flavour to your romantic story.

    Are you going to shoot the film by yourself? Well, your logline is working now!

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2020In: Short Film

    Jinn returns home confident he can save his daughter but at the cost of his own sanity. [Short Film] [Fantasy] [Horror?]

    Chris_P Logliner
    Added an answer on June 7, 2020 at 2:31 pm

    OUTDATED LOGLINE: New Post avalable

    OUTDATED LOGLINE: New Post avalable

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