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When Michael loses his wife and two children in a horrific car accident, he recovers a tunnel to the past before they die, and fights against fate to prevent them from taking the car on that fateful day.
I had a weird thought for this:A: What if the husband succeeds in saving his wife, but in the process is hit by the very car which killed his family.B: The story returns to the new timeline the wife is alive, the husband is dead.C: She then discovers the time tunnel and vows to use it to save her deRead more
I had a weird thought for this:
A: What if the husband succeeds in saving his wife, but in the process is hit by the very car which killed his family.
B: The story returns to the new timeline the wife is alive, the husband is dead.
C: She then discovers the time tunnel and vows to use it to save her dead husband.
D: She enters the tunnel in order to save her husband… fade to black. (THE END)
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I agree with Keymiser, what sets this story in motion and what are the stakes?
I agree with Keymiser, what sets this story in motion and what are the stakes?
See lessA hairstylist?s session with a walk-in becomes much more when she begins to suspect the customer is the woman who abandoned her as a baby.
If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that's significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some "hair emergency"?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it's kRead more
If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that’s significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some “hair emergency”?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it’s knowing things only her mother would or something more alarming.? I’d be interested learning more.
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