1. Posted: October 11, 2022In:

    When a socially-awkward man encounters a thespian girl in an improv class, he must push past his anxiety and perform in a battle for her hand against a man with the same intent.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won... not sure that's really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won… not sure that’s really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2022In:

    When a promising young concert pianist is overlooked for a gifted new student, she must battle for the attention of her neglectful teacher to retain her top spot.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi LachieM, "To maintain her status, a promising young musician must fight for the attention of her negligent instructor, whose interest is turning towards a skillful new student." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi LachieM,

    “To maintain her status, a promising young musician must fight for the attention of her negligent instructor, whose interest is turning towards a skillful new student.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2022In:

    After a duo of orphaned teenagers accidentally murder an attacker, they must cover up their tracks and leave behind the life they worked so hard to build.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Julian, Here's what I see: "To avoid arrest and prosecution, two orphaned teenagers who killed an assailant in self-defense must cover up their tracks and leave behind the life they have worked all their lives to build." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Julian,

    Here’s what I see:

    “To avoid arrest and prosecution, two orphaned teenagers who killed an assailant in self-defense must cover up their tracks and leave behind the life they have worked all their lives to build.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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