1. Posted: May 25, 2020In:

    Nora Nox

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    Mike Pedley Singularity

    This isn't really a logline. Check out the Formula page first. Also, please don't post multiple loglines at the same time. Let people have a chance to respond to one of them and also to people who have posted below yours.

    This isn’t really a logline. Check out the Formula page first.

    Also, please don’t post multiple loglines at the same time. Let people have a chance to respond to one of them and also to people who have posted below yours.

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2020In:

    A pizza delivery driver that resents Superheroes, is inadvertently stuck protecting one when the worlds greatest supervillain arrives in his city during a typical afternoon shift.

    Tjmohr Logliner

    I'd study "The Boys" the TV show to make sure your premise isn't too similar to it. It's also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.

    I’d study “The Boys” the TV show to make sure your premise isn’t too similar to it. It’s also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.

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  3. Posted: February 21, 2020In:

    In a world, where a city is constantly tormented by superhuman creatures called enigmas, three young adults, a cocky hothead, a blunt but caring diplomat, and an energetic adrenaline junkie, discover they?re a part of the enigma population but decide to use their powers to defend Apollo City.

    dpg Singularity

    >>>If you got confused maybe I should rewrite that part to make it more understandable.I'm confused, too.? For the similar reasons.? Including that the logline doesn't ID an antagonist . Who, specifically, is the alpha antagonist? they are defending the city from?

    >>>If you got confused maybe I should rewrite that part to make it more understandable.

    I’m confused, too.? For the similar reasons.? Including that the logline doesn’t ID an antagonist . Who, specifically, is the alpha antagonist? they are defending the city from?

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