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  1. Posted: September 16, 2016In: Thriller

    A savvy, overly confident uni student sets up a food delivery business as a front for drug trafficking, but when his operation is exposed he fakes his death on a hiking trip, but one detective won?t accept his disappearance until the search reveals his body, dead or alive.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2016 at 9:25 pm

    Those were all really great comments guys and really makes me think about my character and how I can make him more interesting, there's a strong reaction from the drug dealer angle which is interesting given that there my exposure to that world hasn't always been what you would expect. The story wasRead more

    Those were all really great comments guys and really makes me think about my character and how I can make him more interesting, there’s a strong reaction from the drug dealer angle which is interesting given that there my exposure to that world hasn’t always been what you would expect. The story was inspired by an interview I did years ago, an young Asian uni student who became involved in the infamous Asian Triad gang that in Sydney, he was caught, found God (it was for Uniting Care). He wanted a glitzy lifestyle that he saw on telly but fortunately managed to come turn his life around. It was a growing up experience for him and I thought in that way his character was relatable, he knew what he was doing but he also realised what the opportunity cost was to his life to his state of mind.

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  2. Posted: September 15, 2016In: Thriller

    When his murderous ex-wife shows up, a dismissed detective must help the police force catch her.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2016 at 10:54 pm

    Agreed with Dkpough1. I'll add that the motivation for the MC to take action is unclear. Why MUST he do anything after she shows up? What's at stake for him?

    Agreed with Dkpough1.

    I’ll add that the motivation for the MC to take action is unclear. Why MUST he do anything after she shows up? What’s at stake for him?

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  3. Posted: September 3, 2016In: Thriller

    An outcast teenager teams up with his high school bully to take down the spirit of Al Capone, who has possessed a small Indiana town to rebuild his empire.

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    Added an answer on September 4, 2016 at 11:19 pm

    As the others have said. ?The math just doesn't add up in this logline.

    As the others have said. ?The math just doesn’t add up in this logline.

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