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A young spirited girl acts as guardian to her transgender friend as they go through the tribulations of a small town society. On one unbelievable evening and at great cost the girl transcends as a savior and etches her passion of friendship in time and memory.
As the others said. The ?protagonist's cause is a worthy one, but, alas, the logline frames a setup, a situation for a plot, but not an actual plot. ?It's long on hyperbole "unbelievable", "at great cost", "transcends". "etchers her passion", but ?short on specifics. You might want to study the guidRead more
As the others said.
The ?protagonist’s cause is a worthy one, but, alas, the logline frames a setup, a situation for a plot, but not an actual plot. ?It’s long on hyperbole “unbelievable”, “at great cost”, “transcends”. “etchers her passion”, but ?short on specifics.
You might want to study the guidelines for constructing an industry standard logline under “Training” at the top of the web page.
See lessThe story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident.
We need to know number of friends and an event. Think of the Big Chill. Based on that. Four friends come together for a funeral only to start blaming each other for course their friends death. Now describe the friends 1) war veterans 2) college friends You get the picture.
We need to know number of friends and an event. Think of the Big Chill. Based on that.
Four friends come together for a funeral only to start blaming each other for course their friends death.
Now describe the friends
1) war veterans
2) college friends
You get the picture.
See lessA persistent class president investigates the disappearances of multiple female students when she discovers the truth behind an admired teacher who, since the death of his family, has kept the students captive, she manipulates him into a trap that leads her to the missing students.
This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.
This tells the story but god is it long. Clear, concise lines are key. Hope this helps.
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