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In 1951,a physicist tasked with designing an early thermonuclear bomb, has a lesbian affair with her young lab assistant.She’s determined to complete the difficult design while struggling for survival when she discovers her lover to be a ruthless Soviet spy
There appear to be two potential plots here;1 - Lover turns out to be a spy and the scientist must choose to either turn her in or save her then act on her choice. = inciting incident is spy discovery her goal is to protect the love interest.2 - A hydrogen bomb is needed the scientist must fight bigRead more
There appear to be two potential plots here;
1 – Lover turns out to be a spy and the scientist must choose to either turn her in or save her then act on her choice. = inciting incident is spy discovery her goal is to protect the love interest.
2 – A hydrogen bomb is needed the scientist must fight bigotry and sexism to achieve her goal of creating a bomb.= inciting incident is given the task to create a bomb, her goal is to make a bomb.
Best you chose one of these as the central/A plot and focus the logline accordingly.
See lessWhen a flippant prankster is ripped off by crazy scammer he seeks compensation but inadvertently starts a relationship with the scammer?s even crazier assistant.
As DPG said, it's a dangerous proposition, for un produced writers,?to steer away from the path of convention and 2 goals in the one script is doing just that. Secondly, a femme fatal is an arch type unique to the film noir genre, literally?including such a description in the logline is not recommenRead more
As DPG said, it’s a dangerous proposition, for un produced writers,?to steer away from the path of convention and 2 goals in the one script is doing just that.
Secondly, a femme fatal is an arch type unique to the film noir genre, literally?including such a description in the logline is not recommended.
See lessWhen Air Force One and a large passenger plane’s engines fail, the hacker responsible informs one of the secret service agents that he has two hours before each plane crashes to either assassinate the President or let his wife and child die on the other plane.
I see a problem with the core concept. ?If the hacker can make the engines of Air Force One?fail, why doesn't he just crash the plane? ?Why bother with the secret service agent at all. I'm sure you'll deal with this in the actual script, but it was my first thought when I read the log line. So maybeRead more
I see a problem with the core concept. ?If the hacker can make the engines of Air Force One?fail, why doesn’t he just crash the plane? ?Why bother with the secret service agent at all.
I’m sure you’ll deal with this in the actual script, but it was my first thought when I read the log line.
So maybe take the part about the engine failing out. ?Because all that matters is that a secret service agent has credible evidence that his wife and child are about to be murdered unless he kills the president first. ?Trouble is, he’s currently midair on Airforce one.
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