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  1. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Thriller

    A young girl with amnesia is found on top of the highest mountain in Maine with blood-stained clothes, and the only one who can help her is the man who found her, a backwoods homesteader.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 6:39 am

    This is what I can glean: A blood-soaked young amnesiac is rescued from the peak of a mountain by a backwoods Maine homesteader. As you can see – interesting characters, but there’s a “thriller” gap. Now, if the homesteader was missing his wife and found this blood-soaked girl… Hope you find this coRead more

    This is what I can glean:
    A blood-soaked young amnesiac is rescued from the peak of a mountain by a backwoods Maine homesteader.

    As you can see – interesting characters, but there’s a “thriller” gap. Now, if the homesteader was missing his wife and found this blood-soaked girl…

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  2. Posted: October 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Madrid, 2008. A cynical and disbelieving journalist of events, travels to Paris to investigate the death of the African model Katoucha Samrawitt, defender of the end of the ablation in her continent and related to certain political spheres. Determined to decipher if the death was a suicide, as the official version maintains, or a murder, he will have to face those who do not want the truth to come out.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 6:06 am

    “A cynical journalist investigating the presumed suicide of a top African model must [GOAL]” I am unable to envision why the model was killed, who the baddies are, and what the shocking truth will look like on-screen. Hope you find this constructive, keep going.

    “A cynical journalist investigating the presumed suicide of a top African model must [GOAL]”

    I am unable to envision why the model was killed, who the baddies are, and what the shocking truth will look like on-screen.

    Hope you find this constructive, keep going.

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2021In: Thriller

    During the BLM riots, a well-to-do couple takes in and tends to a wounded a black man. But when they discover he may be wanted for murdering a cop, they must decide whether to believe in his innocence, or face the consequences of harboring a cop killer.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 27, 2021 at 12:50 pm

    The concept is solid, however logically, it isn't up to the leads to decide whether the wounded man is innocent or guilty, it is up to a judge. Deciding innocence or guilt is above their pay grade. As a result, you need to add another element, that he is hunted by some specific person (Or people) ouRead more

    The concept is solid, however logically, it isn’t up to the leads to decide whether the wounded man is innocent or guilty, it is up to a judge. Deciding innocence or guilt is above their pay grade.

    As a result, you need to add another element, that he is hunted by some specific person (Or people) out for vengeance. These people don’t care about justice just vengeance. So it may be immoral for the leads to hand him over to the police since some in the police force might not want him to go to trial but might just want him dead.

    In adding that element, now handing him over to the authorities might be immoral, but harboring him might be immoral also, thus the Delima and the conflict.

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