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When a stranger meets an evasive artist, the artist must give into the stranger?s outrageous demands, or risk his identity being revealed and his credibility ruined
Agreed with DPG. Also best to be more specific in the descriptions of a logline, the antagonist description says very little about how they would be a problem for the main character. However if they would be described as a desperate paparazzi then the potential for conflict is immediately understoodRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also best to be more specific in the descriptions of a logline, the antagonist description says very little about how they would be a problem for the main character. However if they would be described as a desperate paparazzi then the potential for conflict is immediately understood. Similarly the main character description is vague perhaps best to describe him or her as paranoid, reclusive or both, this way they come across as possibly baring psychological issues and exposure for them could be disastrous.
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It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.
It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.
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This is a pretty well written logline. There's a goal and high steaks. I understand how the story's going to work and the genre. My only question is about Emma. We don't usually need a name in loglines, so I'd recommend replacing the proper name with a descriptor. What kind of a girl is Emma? ThinkiRead more
This is a pretty well written logline. There’s a goal and high steaks. I understand how the story’s going to work and the genre.
My only question is about Emma. We don’t usually need a name in loglines, so I’d recommend replacing the proper name with a descriptor. What kind of a girl is Emma? Thinking about how an experience like this would change a person may lead you to an interesting character. What is someone going to learn from surviving, or even just being put into, this kind of a situation? Is she a shy girl, the polar opposite of a suave seducer, or a bit of a party animal?
Again, this is super good. Addressing that one note may be all you need to solidify the concept.
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