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  1. Posted: November 20, 2015In: Thriller

    In the dawn of e-banking in Nigeria, a troubled and technophobic bank auditor struggles to keep her job but must outwit a disgruntled colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank.

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    Added an answer on November 25, 2015 at 7:08 am

    It seems to me that a fundamental weakness of all 3 versions of the heist story is? this reel story has to compete against real stories, true events, e-thefts of account information and money.? And the truth is stranger than fiction.? What I read in the newspaper is stranger and more dramatically inRead more

    It seems to me that a fundamental weakness of all 3 versions of the heist story is? this reel story has to compete against real stories, true events, e-thefts of account information and money.? And the truth is stranger than fiction.? What I read in the newspaper is stranger and more dramatically interesting than anything I can see in these loglines.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: November 19, 2015In: Thriller

    A hard-boiled bank auditor struggles to outwit a colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank for perceived negligence that wrongfully landed him in jail.

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    Added an answer on November 23, 2015 at 4:10 am

    In the dawn of e-banking in Nigeria, a troubled and technophobic bank auditor struggles to keep her job but must thwart the sinister plans of a disgruntled colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank.

    In the dawn of e-banking in Nigeria, a troubled and technophobic bank auditor struggles to keep her job but must thwart the sinister plans of a disgruntled colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank.

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  3. Posted: November 17, 2015In: Thriller

    An American dog-walker jailed for a drug offense in Brazil jumps bail in a bid to escape an unscrupulous businessman bent on coercing him into a scheme to claim an inheritance left behind by the owner of an oil conglomerate.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 19, 2015 at 8:08 am

    As Nir Shelter said.? Too many moving parts that don't seem related. And the character with an objective goal,? the inheritance, is the villain.? The protagonist's? goal, such as it is, is negative and reactionary --- all he wants to do is elude the villain.What does the protagonist want to do for hRead more

    As Nir Shelter said.? Too many moving parts that don’t seem related.

    And the character with an objective goal,? the inheritance, is the villain.? The protagonist’s? goal, such as it is, is negative and reactionary — all he wants to do is elude the villain.

    What does the protagonist want to do for himself that is proactive instead of reactive?? What is his objective goal?

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