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  1. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Thriller

    A paranoid security consultant is contacted by an unknown woman claiming he?s the target of an organisation that makes assassinations look like accidents, however, as he struggles to discover why he?s been targeted, he?s confronted with conflicting stories of his own actions.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 12:45 pm

    When a milquetoast delivery man discovers he's the target of an assassination plot he has 24 hours to discover who is after him, why, and how to stop them.? (29 words) "Milquetoast" rather than "Paranoid" because the latter entails the possibility he could be fantasizing the whole conspiracy.? And iRead more

    When a milquetoast delivery man discovers he’s the target of an assassination plot he has 24 hours to discover who is after him, why, and how to stop them.? (29 words)

    “Milquetoast” rather than “Paranoid” because the latter entails the possibility he could be fantasizing the whole conspiracy.? And if that’s the final reveal — that’s all in his head — well, imho, it’s not nice to fool an audience like that unless you’ve got some really clever way to fool them and make them enjoy being played for dupes.?? And if you do, good luck.

    “Delivery man” rather than “security consultant ” to create more suspense, more mystery — why is?the most innocuous of men, the least likely candidate for an assassination being targeted?

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2015In: Thriller

    After a mega storm a single mum rush home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must help him escape to find out what he has done with her daughter.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2015 at 8:13 am

    A single mum returns home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must him get to his pick up point o find out what he has done with her daughter.

    A single mum returns home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must him get to his pick up point o find out what he has done with her daughter.

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  3. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Thriller

    When a distrusting security consultant finds a phone and inadvertently reads a text containing a random set of numbers, he must quickly uncover their meaning when he’s made a target by a mysterious group who seem to be able to predict his movements.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 9, 2015 at 7:23 pm

    How does the consultant know that the the numbers aren't just random numbers, that they are meaningful and he ?must decrypt them??It seems to me that his being "distrusting"?may be ?necessary to the premise, but it is not a sufficient grounds for the audience to buy the premise.? He could be distrusRead more

    How does the consultant know that the the numbers aren’t just random numbers, that they are meaningful and he ?must decrypt them?

    ?It seems to me that his being “distrusting”?may be ?necessary to the premise, but it is not a sufficient grounds for the audience to buy the premise.? He could be distrusting and wrong.? The audience needs to be given a logical, empirical reason to believe that his suspicion is warranted. Ditto the logline reader — well, this one.? What is the cause-and-effect relationship between the numbers and the attacks that gives the consultant probable cause to be believe they are linked?

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