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  1. Posted: June 7, 2020In: Thriller

    When a global pandemic strikes, a construction crew in the midst of building a mysterious billionaire’s remote New Zealand bunker attempt to save themselves by sheltering inside it. However, they risk their own lives when their client arrives wanting to use it and they refuse to leave.

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    A fractious construction crew takes refuge in a survival bunker when a deadly pandemic breaks out but must unite to fight eviction when the owner and his ruthless security arrive.

    A fractious construction crew takes refuge in a survival bunker when a deadly pandemic breaks out but must unite to fight eviction when the owner and his ruthless security arrive.

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  2. Posted: June 9, 2020In: Thriller

    A demonically supercharged serial killer dupes his way into a single mother’s life which rouses a talented FBI agent from retirement and awakens Poseidon.

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    Added an answer on June 10, 2020 at 8:13 am

    A logline isn't about mystery, it's about providing  a concise summary of the plot up to either the midpoint or end of Act II using (ideally) no more than 40 words phrased as a single sentence. Hide the mystery and, as is frequently the case, it simply doesn't make sense. Or you bury the hook. EitheRead more

    A logline isn’t about mystery, it’s about providing  a concise summary of the plot up to either the midpoint or end of Act II using (ideally) no more than 40 words phrased as a single sentence.

    Hide the mystery and, as is frequently the case, it simply doesn’t make sense. Or you bury the hook. Either way, it massively damages your chances of your script being read by anyone. So, yeah, I might get the gist if I read it, but I’m not as likely to read it if I don’t know what I’m reading. The beauty of a logline is that it’s not supposed (in my opinion – two schools of thought here) to give away the ending. So there is still that mystery but it’s the curiosity over what happens to the hero. What it’s most definitely not, is mystery over what the plot is actually about.

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  3. Posted: June 8, 2020In: Thriller

    A dangerous serial killer charms his way into a single Mom’s life which brings a talented FBI agent out of retirement to work on the case whilst supernatural Neptune is also awakened to help.

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2020 at 8:37 pm

    Thanks I will keep working on the logline!

    Thanks I will keep working on the logline!

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