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  1. Posted: June 6, 2020In: Thriller

    Professor Tai Russo returns cursed artifacts from Noveau Island where 17th century Scottish spirit was exiled to and Tai must find the spirit peace before the artifacts possessive powers take over.

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2020 at 8:02 am

    You could leave out the profs name and that the spirit was exiled. Other than that its good.

    You could leave out the profs name and that the spirit was exiled. Other than that its good.

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2020In: Thriller

    A dangerous serial killer charms his way into a single Mom’s life which brings a talented FBI agent out of retirement to work on the case whilst supernatural Neptune is also awakened to help.

    [Deleted User]
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 10:50 am

    It can have both.

    It can have both.

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  3. Posted: May 29, 2020In: Thriller

    A man is seduced into robbing his lover’s psychotic boyfriend, when he does, they go on the run – but soon question whether they can trust each other.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on June 6, 2020 at 1:54 am

    Hi Craig,My apologies for a late reply.I think I need to outline and think it through.INTENTION - love/money.OBSTACLE - love/money.I'd rather have one clear specific goal here. And one clear formidable obstacle.The ongoing thing/through-line (?) of love vs money is interesting though.My idea was toRead more

    Hi Craig,

    My apologies for a late reply.

    I think I need to outline and think it through.

    INTENTION – love/money.

    OBSTACLE – love/money.

    I’d rather have one clear specific goal here. And one clear formidable obstacle.

    The ongoing thing/through-line (?) of love vs money is interesting though.

    My idea was to do something whereby there is constantly suspense – whether that character is after love or money. Perhaps give them a gun with one bullet. The whole thing – just two people on the run, etc.

    Hmm – kind of like TRUE ROMANCE meets THE TREASURE OF SIERRA MADRE.

    That idea doesn’t exactly shine in the above logline.

    Thank you for your thoughts.

    THD

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