1. Posted: March 23, 2017In:

    BLOODLUST The dormant past life as an 8th Century Norse Berserker is sparked in a modern day peace loving Hindu man after he witnesses his loved ones murdered in a robbery. Now he must fight to control the growing bloodlust before it destroys him.

    OlDustyDogg Logliner

    Interesting. I like the contrasts of past lifes. Im wondering if the berzerker must have atoned for his violence in order to be reincarnated as a Hindu. I also wonder How is the bloodlust destroying him. Does he want to kill random people? Is he on a quest for vengeance and taking the violence too fRead more

    Interesting. I like the contrasts of past lifes. Im wondering if the berzerker must have atoned for his violence in order to be reincarnated as a Hindu.
    I also wonder How is the bloodlust destroying him. Does he want to kill random people? Is he on a quest for vengeance and taking the violence too far? Who is judging him? Is he risking the Vikings identity taking over completely? What are the stakes? Lots of questions. I’m new to this so maybe my advice isn’t that great but my main take is that ‘bloodlust threatens to destroy him is a bit vague.

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  2. Posted: February 25, 2020In:

    When an teenager becomes insecure about her boyfriend’s friendship with their female road-trip companion, she decides to make him jealous by inviting a dangerous hitchhiker along for the ride.

    variable Uberwriter

    I think you meant-Jealous of her boyfriend's association with their female road trip companion, an insecure teenager invites a hitchhiker who turns out to be a serial killer

    I think you meant-

    Jealous of her boyfriend’s association with their female road trip companion, an insecure teenager invites a hitchhiker who turns out to be a serial killer

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  3. Posted: March 9, 2020In:

    A young woman plagued with visions of her twin sister by committing and witness murders only to figure out that they are deadly consequences.

    Karel Segers Samurai

    I agree. Tony has received a lot of feedback from tons of people, who have spent considerable time assessing his work. But he doesn't seem to incorporate any of it in his new loglines. He rarely reviews other people's loglines, and when he does, he doesn't give more than "Great! I would watch it" orRead more

    I agree.

    Tony has received a lot of feedback from tons of people, who have spent considerable time assessing his work. But he doesn’t seem to incorporate any of it in his new loglines. He rarely reviews other people’s loglines, and when he does, he doesn’t give more than “Great! I would watch it” or similar.

    He has continued to operate in a spirit that is 100% against that of this website.

    As a result, Tony is now banned from the site indefinitely. This has not happened before in the nearly 8 years this site has been running…

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