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After noticing the same stranger at yet another suicide, a novice detective sets out to prove his claims before she incites another tragedy
A novice detective must identify the stranger he notices at numerous suicide scenes and prove she is linked to the deaths before she strikes again.Although it may be better to already know who the stranger is? ?The IMDB logline for Basic Instinct is: ?"A violent police detective investigates a brutaRead more
A novice detective must identify the stranger he notices at numerous suicide scenes and prove she is linked to the deaths before she strikes again.
Although it may be better to already know who the stranger is? ?The IMDB logline for Basic Instinct is: ?”A violent police detective investigates a brutal murder that might involve a manipulative and seductive novelist.”
A novice detective investigates a series of suicides that might involve a brazen stranger seen at each crime scene.
I’m much better at critiquing that actually coming up with loglines! LOL
P.S. ?I’m not sure that NLP is sexy enough to incite suicide! ?It’s pretty outdated and discredited scientifically – maybe have her a psychiatrist/hypnotist/cult leader/counsellor?
See lessA woman at a crossroads in her life finally decides to go see a therapist and discovers how the natural and the supernatural world collide.
What is the lead character's goal? What is standing in the lead character's way?
What is the lead character’s goal?
What is standing in the lead character’s way?
See lessWhen an ATC controller is contacted by the flight on which his troubled younger brother crashed 13 years ago, he must convince the pilot to get his brother on the radio to make amends, and find out why his body was never found.
As written, the logline does not indicate a "Thriller", rather it points to a drama. And that drama is taking place entirely in the man's head as there is no indication anyone else is involved. The only question is why the mental breakdown took so long in coming. If this is not meant to be a story aRead more
As written, the logline does not indicate a “Thriller”, rather it points to a drama. And that drama is taking place entirely in the man’s head as there is no indication anyone else is involved. The only question is why the mental breakdown took so long in coming.
If this is not meant to be a story about one man’s mental struggle with guilt, then the inciting incident must be the appearance of the long lost plane on the ATC’s radar screen. (Maybe the plane disappeared over the ocean and no bodies or wreckage were ever found.) This would put the film in either the sci-fi or supernatural thriller genres. However, planes don’t stay on one tower’s radar screen for very long, either they land or fly on. In this case the main goal has to be to get the plane on the ground and find out where it has been for the last 13 years. Yes, the man wants to reconcile with his brother, but that is a secondary plot line.
I think you have an interesting idea, but the logline needs a clear direction so we know where the story is headed..
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