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The A group of perfect student decide to describe in a school exclusively for good students. When they started their studies, they’ll find in a place of madness, where the only way to alive is escaping from the wall that covers all the school
Leaning towards: Behind the [dark] wall that surrounds a pristine school, a group of gifted students take a shot at freedom when they discover the academy is not what it seems.
Leaning towards:
Behind the [dark] wall that surrounds a pristine school, a group of gifted students take a shot at freedom when they discover the academy is not what it seems.
See lessThe night before her on call shift, Sarah, a nurse working a second job, finds herself in the midst of late night deliveries. As she tries to walk her way back home, after the last delivery of the night, her night leads her all the way to work.
You are describing scenes, not the plot. What is the lead character's goal? What is standing in her way?
You are describing scenes, not the plot. What is the lead character’s goal? What is standing in her way?
See lessone of the twin police duo is not in his right mind but he is very smart also no one knows what macabre plans this one has in mind implicates him in wanting to commit a murder in fact there are investigations but he camouflages himself in his own work which leads him to not be discovered in the future from there they will be involved in other matters including the stalking of his brother’s daughter, his twin..
This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don't have a clue what it is about. May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events. Read the sections labeled "Formula" and "Examples", theRead more
This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don’t have a clue what it is about.
May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events.
Read the sections labeled “Formula” and “Examples”, then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews.
Good luck!
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