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When an overprotected teenager? falls in love with an older rock-climber with trust problems, she convinces him to help her climb the dangerous “Watcher Crack” – but halfway up the wall they witness a murder and find themselves the target of a homicidal maniac desperate to cover his tracks.
Freewill:Re: A naive teen and her more-experienced partner witness a murder half-way through a remote rock-climb, and find themselves the target of the killer trying to cover his tracksI have no particular problem with this version in terms of the issue of unity and singularity of plot.I do have a qRead more
Freewill:
Re: A naive teen and her more-experienced partner witness a murder half-way through a remote rock-climb, and find themselves the target of the killer trying to cover his tracks
I have no particular problem with this version in terms of the issue of unity and singularity of plot.
I do have a question about the logline seeming to cast dual protagonists.? Who owns the story?? Who is your point of view character?? Who has the strongest arc?? Is the plot really about the relationship between the teen and the experienced climber?? Or…?
(FWIW: I favor framing the logline with the teen as the protagonist, the pov character, because then the film is more marketable: it can be promoted targeting the teenage/young adult demographic — the most desired and lucrative group.)
I am aware of but haven’t (yet) seen “The River Wild”.? Reading the plot summary at IMDB, it seems that Meryl Streep’s character is the protagonist because she’s the experienced guide, the one with the skill and knowledge to steer the raft.? And I’m guessing she’s the point of view character.
That is my provisional answer.? I’ve added it to my viewing queue.?? As is my practice, after I viewing a picture, I? will write my version of a logline? for it.
See lessAn airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}
This could? be a mixed genre crime thriller with horror as the second genre. Something comes on to the plane with the diamonds. Could be a curse, a demon guardian, an alien,etc.
This could? be a mixed genre crime thriller with horror as the second genre. Something comes on to the plane with the diamonds. Could be a curse, a demon guardian, an alien,etc.
See lessThe unexpected arrival of young man claiming to be an estranged relative raises a family’s suspicions when a string of crimes rattles their community.
As the others said.And it's unclear who the protagonist is, the point of view character.? And what is the objective goal?
As the others said.
And it’s unclear who the protagonist is, the point of view character.? And what is the objective goal?
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