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  1. Posted: August 12, 2019In: Thriller

    After a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy, a disgraced athlete partners with an old childhood friend to execute an insurance scheme that puts her on the wrong end of a revenge plot.

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    Added an answer on August 14, 2019 at 1:20 pm

    Was the tragic death a family member or an accident that puts the family in financial jeopardy? Does the tragic death have anything to do with the athlete being disgraced? Is it necessary in the logline to mention partnering with a childhood friend? These are just a few questions that may need clariRead more

    Was the tragic death a family member or an accident that puts the family in financial jeopardy? Does the tragic death have anything to do with the athlete being disgraced? Is it necessary in the logline to mention partnering with a childhood friend? These are just a few questions that may need clarifying.

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2019In: Thriller

    When a brain implant in his wife goes bad, a guru neurosurgeon must find a way to neutralise the implant; but when he discovers the problem is deliberate, not a glitch, he must find and destory the person tampering his wife’s mind before his wife kills herself, his daughter and others.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 30, 2019 at 4:15 am

    A "Doh!" moment. Thanks to Richiev and Paul Clarke for catching my goof.Still, I believe the nature and purpose of the implant needs to be clarified.? What's was it supposed to do versus what does it turn out to do?? Specifically what does "go bad" mean?

    A “Doh!” moment. Thanks to Richiev and Paul Clarke for catching my goof.

    Still, I believe the nature and purpose of the implant needs to be clarified.? What’s was it supposed to do versus what does it turn out to do?? Specifically what does “go bad” mean?

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  3. Posted: July 26, 2019In: Thriller

    When a cynical woman and idealistic man find themselves on a sinking boat far out to sea, they must find a way to work together to survive until help arrives.

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    Added an answer on July 26, 2019 at 9:23 pm

    >> "find themselves on a sinking boat" Only "find themselves"? Something happened that forced them to make a conscious choice, an intentional effort take to a lifeboat to survive. What happened? And why wouldn't two people trapped on a boat work together to stay alive?? How believable that twoRead more

    >> “find themselves on a sinking boat”

    Only “find themselves”? Something happened that forced them to make a conscious choice, an intentional effort take to a lifeboat to survive. What happened?

    And why wouldn’t two people trapped on a boat work together to stay alive?? How believable that two such people would choose to die rather than work together??? Yes, the polarity may be the source of some lively arguments over the meaning of life, politics, art — whatever, but I don’t see how that in any way threatens their chances of survival.? The character traits defined seem incommensurate to the situation.

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