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In 1961, a British double agent, assigned to stop a uranium smuggling operation run by a secret organization of Nazis, falls for the chief Nazi?s fiancee.
In 1961, when a British spy falls for a Nazi?s fiancee, he jeopardises his assignment to thwart the Nazi?s uranium smuggling operation.Dpg - After a recent rewrite, I?ve found the relationship to be integral. I think I?ll go with your recent one. It ticks all the boxes. I?ll be putting this up on thRead more
In 1961, when a British spy falls for a Nazi?s fiancee, he jeopardises his assignment to thwart the Nazi?s uranium smuggling operation.
Dpg – After a recent rewrite, I?ve found the relationship to be integral. I think I?ll go with your recent one. It ticks all the boxes. I?ll be putting this up on the Blacklist soon – I?m curious to see what logline my reviewer gives it. Thank you for your contributions and endless support. Also, I might put up this new one to see what people think.?
Ckharper – I do as well. Hmm. Well. He?s a double agent turned traitor/Nazi war criminal. Ex-Nazi makes sense. It is a bit more complicated because he is a pawn/something of a puppet. But with marketing – I do need to keep things simple.
You?re right. It does declutter it. I must admit doing a logline for a series that hasn?t been written and having done a pilot where you?re holding out on plot developments/surprises – doing the series logline is quite hard (I know it shouldn’t be). But yeah – we?ll go with Nazi. For clarity and leanness and for marketing the thing.
As for the pilot, I might go with yours too.?
?In 1961, a retired spy living the highlife on the French Riviera, must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal?.
But I’ll tweak it and use this one…
?In 1961, a British spy must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal living on the French Riviera?.?
(As I’ve rewritten the pilot, he’s a bit more mysterious. I know FR is a little redundant – but I’m so damn sure that’s a selling point.)
I hate going with someone else?s but one cannot let their ego get in the way of progress. After a few months of logline work – I really need to get these things sent off.
Okay cheers everyone.
See lessA haunted young man must decide whether he?s mentally ill or really seeing ghosts when his recently deceased best friend asks for help solving his murder.
And if the story is about solving the murder, tell us more about the friend and the world of his that the protag will explore.
And if the story is about solving the murder, tell us more about the friend and the world of his that the protag will explore.
See lessSeries logline: In 1961, a British double agent, retired and living under a new alias on the French Riviera, must thwart a corrupt government agent secretly leaking information to an underground organisation of Nazis, men he sabotaged many years ago.
Thanks ckharper. I like your one. I?ll have to add the date so people don?t think the villain is very old. ?In 1961, a retired spy living the highlife on the French Riviera, must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal?. Nice and short too.
Thanks ckharper.
I like your one. I?ll have to add the date so people don?t think the villain is very old.
?In 1961, a retired spy living the highlife on the French Riviera, must return to his old dangerous games to catch a Nazi war criminal?.
Nice and short too.
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