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  1. Posted: April 24, 2019In: Thriller

    A lawyer unwittingly frees and later marries a guilty man. Now she?ll stop at nothing to see him convicted of a murder he didn?t commit.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 25, 2019 at 7:00 am

    Let me unpack the story as I understand it:A lawyer helps a client beat a murder rap believing her client to be innocent [back story or opening setup].Only to discover new and compelling evidence that he actually he did the crime [inciting incident].But because? of the Constitutional guarantee againRead more

    Let me unpack the story as I understand it:

    A lawyer helps a client beat a murder rap believing her client to be innocent [back story or opening setup].
    Only to discover new and compelling evidence that he actually he did the crime [inciting incident].
    But because? of the Constitutional guarantee against double jeopardy, he can’t be retried [complication].
    So she conspires to bring him “to justice” by a false charge of murder [plot].

    Well, why not cut to the chase? She decides to murder him herself.? Get “street justice”.

    The dramatic challenge for you as the writer is: how to make the audience at least empathize with her motives? Well,? I suggest that one way is the nature of his crime.? It can’t have been an impulsive crime of passion, done in a moment of anger (and under the influence of, say, alcohol).? Rather, his original crime has to have been premeditated and heinous,? say an act of prolonged painful torture on a helpless woman while she was alive, and depravity upon her body after she was dead.? ?In this way the narrative can sell? an audience on street justice emotionally? as justified even if logically they know otherwise. (There are any number of movies and crime novels that resolve the story with street justice.)

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2019In: Thriller

    A sex addict, psychologically unable to have sex with the first woman he?s ever loved, returns to his old psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman, and the only one who has come close to curing his fractured psyche.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 10:24 pm

    Okay. Thanks everyone. I'll see what I can do.

    Okay. Thanks everyone. I’ll see what I can do.

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2019In: Thriller

    In 1961, a British double agent is blackmailed with his past crimes by a duplicitous former colleague, and forced to confront some old faces, as he becomes a pawn in the entrapment of a suspected Nazi war criminal, now an American jet-setter living on the French Riviera.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 10:22 pm

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I'll see what I can do.

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I’ll see what I can do.

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