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Fiesty female London detective has a veteran New York cop foisted on her while she struggles to catch a serial killer with some very nasty habits before he strikes again in his search for a worth mate – or his attention turns to her.
Great comments guys thank you.? Now should I try again here so you can see it, or write a new logline?? NicolaCairnX
Great comments guys thank you.? Now should I try again here so you can see it, or write a new logline?? NicolaCairnX
See lessAfter a king dies a mysterious death, the king’s seductive influential adviser calls the impressionable son to the throne to assume control, unaware that he is secretly investigating his father’s death to make sure he isn’t next to risk the fall of the kingdom.
You switch PoV in your logline.It begins from the adviser point of view, then switches to the young prince's view.A logline should be told from one point of view, and that is the PoV of the lead characterWhich brings us to the next important question...Who is the lead character? The kid or the advisRead more
You switch PoV in your logline.
It begins from the adviser point of view, then switches to the young prince’s view.
A logline should be told from one point of view, and that is the PoV of the lead character
Which brings us to the next important question…
Who is the lead character? The kid or the adviser.
See lessA man who assumes identities suffers a mental uplink malfunction, causing him to suffer many of his previous identities, making him remember a terrorist attack on a chief meeting that could start the next world war.
Bit confusing.? Suggestion:? A man who assumes different identities (Why?) suffers a breakdown, causing him to relive the worst of them, during which he remembers a classified? incident that could start the next World War.
Bit confusing.? Suggestion:? A man who assumes different identities (Why?) suffers a breakdown, causing him to relive the worst of them, during which he remembers a classified? incident that could start the next World War.
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