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When a single mother investigates her son?s claim that he was murdered in his past life, she inadvertently implicates her self in the unsolved crime and becomes the number one suspect. To prove her innocence, they go on the run, determined to find the real killer before a hard as nails detective can bring them in.
Why MUST she do anything? Kids say stuff all the time, most of which makes little to no sense. Why does she suddenly decide to take his claims seriously? Why MUST she act?
Why MUST she do anything? Kids say stuff all the time, most of which makes little to no sense. Why does she suddenly decide to take his claims seriously? Why MUST she act?
See lessA rookie female detective, out to prove herself, is tasked with protecting a single mother and her son when a serial killer learns that the young boy claims to be the re-incarnation of one of his victims, and tries to kill him again.
I agree with all previous comments. My biggest question though is why does the killer care? Unless this boy can remember incriminating facts about the killer then surely, knowing this is a sure fire way to get caught, he'd just steer clear. What is it about the reincarnated person that the killer deRead more
I agree with all previous comments.
My biggest question though is why does the killer care? Unless this boy can remember incriminating facts about the killer then surely, knowing this is a sure fire way to get caught, he’d just steer clear. What is it about the reincarnated person that the killer deems so important that he must risk his life to kill him again. Just as the protagonist must have a clear visual goal, the antagonist’s goal must also be clear. How does the killer even learn about this? If the mother found out that her son was a serial killer’s victim reincarnated wouldn’t she just keep quiet? This setup also means that this serial killer has been wanted for at least say 4/5 years minimum? The boy has to be old enough to be able to express that he’s reincarnated. What’s the killer been doing all this time?
I feel there’s a ?lot of implausibility that, whilst it initially sounds cool, actually ends up asking too much of the audience. The reincarnation bit is the hook – the audience must buy into this so strengthen how that element works. The boy can’t just claim that he is… there has to be undeniable proof!
Hope this helps.
See lessOn her journey to San Antonio to join her father, a young illegal immigrant works on a farm in South Texas where workers keep disappearing as the avocado trees flourish.
I agree with some of the other comments here. I love that protagonist is a female illegal immigrant. That really puts her at a disadvantage starting out, and the odds are against her. Stick with that as your main character. It makes sense to me that she should be going to the farm because she just cRead more
I agree with some of the other comments here. I love that protagonist is a female illegal immigrant. That really puts her at a disadvantage starting out, and the odds are against her. Stick with that as your main character. It makes sense to me that she should be going to the farm because she just crossed illegally, and is looking for work. If her father works there, and she believes he can help her get a job, her motivation would make sense. To me, the inciting incident should be that when she arrives at the farm her father has vanished under mysterious circumstances. ?Also odd, as he was expecting her and wouldn’t just leave. The plot line would then make sense as to why she isn’t simply fleeing. She’s searching for her missing father and trying to uncover this mystery of the disappearing workers. I like your set up, and would love to see this written!
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