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After giving nourishment and shelter to a wounded, fugitive vampire, a love-struck yet timid teen joins her quest: to assassinate her Sire before he starts a vampiric civil war.
I want to think everyone for their feedback. I think that my current logline is good enough to point in the right direction while I move forward with my project.
I want to think everyone for their feedback. I think that my current logline is good enough to point in the right direction while I move forward with my project.
See lessWhen a Russian submarine sailed from Murmansk into the Cuban Missile Crisis, with a nuclear torpedo, Vasili Arkhipov, survivor of the K-19 nuclear disaster, battled PTSD and prevented the captain from destroying the civilized world on the most dangerous day of human history.
Sounds like an interesting story.? One thing to keep in mind is that a logline should not contain a spoiler -- should not give way how the story ends.? Even though we know the Cuban crisis ended without a catastrophe, the narrative should be framed in terms of what --specifically-- he must do.? ?NotRead more
Sounds like an interesting story.? One thing to keep in mind is that a logline should not contain a spoiler — should not give way how the story ends.? Even though we know the Cuban crisis ended without a catastrophe, the narrative should be framed in terms of what –specifically– he must do.? ?Not in terms of what he (eventually) does do.
And because it’s “inspired by” real events, I suggest the proper genre for marketing purposes is “historical” rather than “thriller”.
See lessA mentally & physically abused teen witnesses the murder of his family. Now an Adult, he enacts revenge on the entire family responsible.
The only thing you need to add is some detail around the family responsible. Being specific in a logline that explains a well worn genre, like revenge. But you do get some free brain power from the reader because we all know what a revenge story looks like. The abuse adds to the depth of imagine I cRead more
The only thing you need to add is some detail around the family responsible.
Being specific in a logline that explains a well worn genre, like revenge. But you do get some free brain power from the reader because we all know what a revenge story looks like.
The abuse adds to the depth of imagine I conjure when reading a logline.
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