1. Posted: June 27, 2018In:

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, his life becomes ever more obscure the deeper he commits to it and the people involved.

    A_R_Road Logliner

    thank you both for the input on this. I'm gonna put it on the shelf until I can delve a little deeper into the concept.

    thank you both for the input on this. I’m gonna put it on the shelf until I can delve a little deeper into the concept.

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  2. Posted: May 29, 2018In:

    A young married couple who jointly own a biotechnology startup find themselves in grave danger when a multinational company uses espionage tactics to turn them against each other as part of a plot to disgrace and ruin them in order to suppress an invention that will save millions of lives.

    TullyArcher Samurai

    So their goal is to not be pulled apart? Is the action of the film couple's therapy? I'm being sarcastic I know but you didn't actually tell us much about what they'll need to DO.

    So their goal is to not be pulled apart? Is the action of the film couple’s therapy? I’m being sarcastic I know but you didn’t actually tell us much about what they’ll need to DO.

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  3. Posted: May 29, 2018In:

    In order to defeat a plot to suppress technology that will save millions of lives, a surveillance expert must play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse with an evil multinational and the shadowy private intelligence agency that employs him.

    TullyArcher Samurai

    Try writing it again without using clich?s. play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse =?clich? an evil multinational?=? multinational what? also clich? the shadowy private intelligence agency = clich? Good goal, but what are the personal stakes?

    Try writing it again without using clich?s.

    play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse =?clich?
    an evil multinational?=? multinational what? also clich?
    the shadowy private intelligence agency = clich?

    Good goal, but what are the personal stakes?

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