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  1. Posted: April 17, 2018In: Thriller

    After crime rate falls to zero, a lonely detective turns into a serial killer to challenge his fellow detectives.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 18, 2018 at 3:00 pm

    If I understand correctly, the major question here is the following: Given the audience want to identify with the main character to come along on the ride, what did you imagine will make this person accessible. It?s not even about being a serial killer, it?s more of a general requirement. With otherRead more

    If I understand correctly, the major question here is the following: Given the audience want to identify with the main character to come along on the ride, what did you imagine will make this person accessible. It?s not even about being a serial killer, it?s more of a general requirement. With other characters it?s just easier to see or implied.

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  2. Posted: April 16, 2018In: Thriller

    When a deranged brother suddenly kidnaps his younger teenage sister, she must decide whether to awaken or resist her own sadistic urges to survive without becoming a killer herself.

    Nettle Samurai
    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 3:26 pm

    'After escaping her abduction, a terrified girl makes up her mind to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.'What if you keep the abductor a secret. This can be so good, as his brother is the kidnapper and she has decided to inflict pain upon his abductor.You made it thriller. What if you tRead more

    ‘After escaping her abduction, a terrified girl makes up her mind to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.’

    What if you keep the abductor a secret. This can be so good, as his brother is the kidnapper and she has decided to inflict pain upon his abductor.

    You made it thriller. What if you turn it into comedy:

    ‘After escaping her abduction, an annoyed girl gathers balls to find the abductor and quench her sadistic urges.’
    It will be so funny, as her long quest with sadistic urges would end up on her brother and now she must fight her urges.

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Thriller

    When a female editor working overnight with her careerist cameraman discovers he’s the perpetrator in his acquired murder footage, she must safely evacuate the studio

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 10, 2018 at 7:07 am

    variable: I think you have an intriguing story idea.? I suggest you expand the setting and time frame.? That is, make her a studio producer who becomes suspicious after time and again he's the one who gets the scoop, who's always the first on the scene.???"Nightcrawler" meets "American Psycho". fwiwRead more

    variable:

    I think you have an intriguing story idea.? I suggest you expand the setting and time frame.? That is, make her a studio producer who becomes suspicious after time and again he’s the one who gets the scoop, who’s always the first on the scene.???”Nightcrawler” meets “American Psycho”.

    fwiw

     

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