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A female vampire tracks a serial killer before he strikes again, pursued by both a police woman, vampire hunters and a victim from a hundred years ago bent on vengeance. As the net closes she must both face her past and save a young woman targeted as his next victim.
The logline needs an inciting incident to explain why she has chosen to hunt down that particular serial killer.I also suggest you rethink, expand the concept.? To wit,? she's not just tracking down a specific killer, she has made a career, a calling out of? tracking down serial killers, particularlRead more
The logline needs an inciting incident to explain why she has chosen to hunt down that particular serial killer.
I also suggest you rethink, expand the concept.? To wit,? she’s not just tracking down a specific killer, she has made a career, a calling out of? tracking down serial killers, particularly cold cases.
A female vampire who tracks down serial killers? — that’s your hook.? I suggest it could be a hook for a series, not just a feature film.? Each episode (or season) she pursues.? a different killer. (Of course there can be ghosts from the past to complicate her quest.)
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There is something here that would make a good story, it just needs a little bit of tidying. I think dpg struck something here. I think you?re referencing a serial kidnapper, or something akin to that. You just need to make that part a little more clear.
There is something here that would make a good story, it just needs a little bit of tidying. I think dpg struck something here. I think you?re referencing a serial kidnapper, or something akin to that. You just need to make that part a little more clear.
See lessWhen a grieving teacher is blackmailed over the death of his brother, he decides to silence the blackmailer and frame his widow?s new lover for the murder.
I like this. It starts strong. It ends strong. There?s a lot of intrigue here, and as I reread it, I can?t help but be slightly confused. What drives a character to escalate so quickly from being blackmailed to murdering and framing the murder on someone else? I wonder if you could tie the characterRead more
I like this. It starts strong. It ends strong. There?s a lot of intrigue here, and as I reread it, I can?t help but be slightly confused. What drives a character to escalate so quickly from being blackmailed to murdering and framing the murder on someone else? I wonder if you could tie the characters closer together in the story.
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