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In the throes of the Iraq war, a flight medic and his crew risk their lives to save injured soldiers and civilians alike.
As the others have said.The logline sets up an interesting situation for a plot, but, alas, it fails to follow through with a genuine plot.? Taken at face value, it promises an episodic narrative (aka: a string of pearls) where one damn thing (crisis) happens... and then another damn thing happens..Read more
As the others have said.
The logline sets up an interesting situation for a plot, but, alas, it fails to follow through with a genuine plot.? Taken at face value, it promises an episodic narrative (aka: a string of pearls) where one damn thing (crisis) happens… and then another damn thing happens… and then another.? And “one damn thing after another” is necessary for building a plot.? And all the damn things may be harrowing, full of jeopardy, conflict,.
But they ares not sufficient.? To what dramatic climax are all the “one damn things after another” building?? What is the overarching objective goal of the protagonist?
If you haven’t already done so, I suggest you try running your logline through the site’s logline generator..
See lessIn a remote Helmand village, a Special Forces team struggles against the Taliban and faces skeptical locals as they try to secure ground and transfer power to the Afghans.
"When he and his team are sent to a remote Helmand village to? secure free elections for the people,? a special forces captain must fight off Taliban forces determine to stop the vote."
“When he and his team are sent to a remote Helmand village to? secure free elections for the people,? a special forces captain must fight off Taliban forces determine to stop the vote.”
See lessA General in the Olympian Order exacts his vengeance against the corrupt goddess queen of Olympus who killed his family and enslaved him to ten fatal labors.
The logline has echoes of the story of Hercules in Greek mythology.? I think that corruption is a non issue.? The Olympian gods were all too human in their behavior.? They were not expected to live up to some some platonic ideal of justice and fairness. And most of them didn't.Hera drove Hercules maRead more
The logline has echoes of the story of Hercules in Greek mythology.? I think that corruption is a non issue.? The Olympian gods were all too human in their behavior.? They were not expected to live up to some some platonic ideal of justice and fairness. And most of them didn’t.
Hera drove Hercules mad so that he killed his wife and children? His 10 (or 12 depending on the source) labors were his penance.? Why did Hera drive Hercules mad?? Because Hercules’ father was her husband Zeus; he was the offspring of one of his many, many affairs. Zeus, the top honcho on Mt. Olympus, was a serial rapist and adulterer.
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