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When his former lover is killed, an immortal cowboy rises from the dead teams up with a teenage girl to kill those are responsible.
If he's immortal maybe he's facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too. Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power - sees dead people, foRead more
If he’s immortal maybe he’s facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too.
Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power – sees dead people, for instance.
See lessWhen the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family.
Agree with Richiev.Loglines are about objective goals,? places, persons or things that can be visualized on screen.>>>intends to reclaim his ?dignity?. (Which he later learns is his masculinity.)What's the visual for "dignity"?? What does "his masculinity" look like? The elements of a logliRead more
Agree with Richiev.
Loglines are about objective goals,? places, persons or things that can be visualized on screen.
>>>intends to reclaim his ?dignity?. (Which he later learns is his masculinity.)
What’s the visual for “dignity”?? What does “his masculinity” look like? The elements of a logline should map to a visualized object, moment or scene in the film. In terms of cinema. “reclaiming dignity and masculinity” refer to subjective needs.
The logline seems to bury the plot. 21 out of 28 words are about the setup for the plot, only 7 about the plot, the “fun and games” time (a la? the “Save the Cat” paradigm) that happens as a consequence.? And then only indirectly, in terms of? what the deceased’s family does, not in terms of what the main character must do.
See lessUnforgiven meets House of 1,000 Corpses.
The "X meets Y" formulation should be reserved for a pitch meeting.
The “X meets Y” formulation should be reserved for a pitch meeting.
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