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  1. Posted: April 13, 2019In: Western

    In the snowy Montana wilderness, a mysterious frontiersman protects a homestead family from a corrupt lawman and his posse.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 15, 2019 at 11:03 pm

    Hey. Thanks for the feedback. I've looked at the formula.?What do you think of this one? When a corrupt U.S. Marshall, under orders from a brutal company, begins taking land from homesteaders refusing to sell, a wanted frontiersman must protect the homestead family he has taken refuge with.

    Hey. Thanks for the feedback.

    I’ve looked at the formula.?What do you think of this one?

    When a corrupt U.S. Marshall, under orders from a brutal company, begins taking land from homesteaders refusing to sell, a wanted frontiersman must protect the homestead family he has taken refuge with.

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2019In: Western

    On the lam after escaping his life of servitude, Thomas Townes must scratch and claw his way into the unsettled territory of Kansas, but that’s the easy part as he soon learns he’ll be starting a war that carries the headline, BLEEDING KANSAS

    Sienna Logliner
    Added an answer on March 24, 2019 at 1:46 am

    When a young abolitionist? escapes from his slave master,? his struggle for freedom evolves into a battle for emancipation in a war now known as Bleeding Kansas.

    When a young abolitionist? escapes from his slave master,? his struggle for freedom evolves into a battle for emancipation in a war now known as Bleeding Kansas.

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  3. Posted: October 5, 2018In: Western

    When a horde of zombies kill the sheriff of a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, leads the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 8, 2018 at 10:13 pm

    >>>incapacitates the sheriff Only incapacitated?? Seems? weak to me. How about something like: Saved at his hanging by a zombie invasion, a gunslinger stays and fights for the people who want him dead rather than flee town for his life and freedom. >>Saved at his hanging Open with himRead more

    >>>incapacitates the sheriff

    Only incapacitated?? Seems? weak to me.

    How about something like:

    Saved at his hanging by a zombie invasion, a gunslinger stays and fights for the people who want him dead rather than flee town for his life and freedom.

    >>Saved at his hanging
    Open with him being marched from the jail to the scaffold where he’s about to be hung, jeered on by a mob of townspeople.? As the noose being put around his neck — the zombies attack.

    >>>a gunslinger stays and fights
    Give him a clear cut opportunity to flee town in the ensuing chaos, save his live.? Then, for whatever reason, a reversal: he opts to stay and fight for the lives of the very people who want to see him hanged.? This implies a morally redeeming beat– but there’s no need to be explicit because that’s the subjective storyline and loglines are about the objective storyline.

    fwiw

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