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  1. Posted: September 19, 2018In: Western

    When a Native American curse raises the dead to descend on a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, seeks redemption by leading the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 22, 2018 at 3:45 pm

    "When their sheriff?is killed by zombies, a gunslinger, sentenced to hang, is now the only one to lead the peaceful townsfolk in their fight against the undead horde."

    “When their sheriff?is killed by zombies, a gunslinger, sentenced to hang, is now the only one to lead the peaceful townsfolk in their fight against the undead horde.”

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  2. Posted: March 4, 2018In: Western

    (Re-post) Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

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    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on March 8, 2018 at 4:29 pm

    The concept has improved but the logline still needs work - there's too much in it that doesn't directly relate to the plot. Here is a cleaned up version of your logline: Post civil war, after escaping a slave camp run by?ex-confederates, an ex-union soldier gathers his former brothers in arms to atRead more

    The concept has improved but the logline still needs work – there’s too much in it that doesn’t directly relate to the plot.

    Here is a cleaned up version of your logline:
    Post civil war, after escaping a slave camp run by?ex-confederates, an ex-union soldier gathers his former brothers in arms to attack the camp and free the other survivors.

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2018In: Western

    Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 2, 2018 at 10:32 pm

    As Craig demonstrates the much needed shortening of the OP.

    As Craig demonstrates the much needed shortening of the OP.

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