1. Posted: July 10, 2014In:

    Bio-engineer , Frances Cho, awakes from cryogenic sleep, to discover the spaceship?s oxygen supply has been sabotaged, and something is killing the sleepers. Low on oxygen and disorientated, Cho has to stay wide awake if she and her comrades are to survive.

    variable Uberwriter

    After waking up low on oxygen, a disoriented bio-engineer must stay awake to save herself & her team when someone sabotages their spaceship. Interesting premise, would like to hear more, good luck :)

    After waking up low on oxygen, a disoriented bio-engineer must stay awake to save herself & her team when someone sabotages their spaceship.

    Interesting premise, would like to hear more, good luck 🙂

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  2. Posted: March 4, 2014In:

    After five years of wrongful imprisonment in the Space Justice Federations (SJF) penal colony, Instead of walking free and into the arms of his wife, ex SJF cop Taylor must outwit a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies to gain his freedom. 2. On the day of his discharge, after serving five years wrongful imprisonment by the Space Justice Federation (SJF), SJF cop Taylor should be a free man. Instead of walking into the waiting arms of his wife,Taylor finds a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies stands between him and this reunion .

    kimberly Penpusher

    this is a synopsis, not a logline. Logline's say all of that in one or two sentences :-)

    this is a synopsis, not a logline. Logline’s say all of that in one or two sentences 🙂

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2014In:

    A desperate father, forced to hijack a plane by terrorists who have his kids, must outwit the resourceful air marshall on his trail after his flight is cancelled and all the passengers are sojourned to a cheap airport hotel.

    BlakeH Penpusher

    Hi, I'd put a little less detail in the 'forced to hijack a plane' section because it feels a little irrelevant and top-heavy by the end.

    Hi, I’d put a little less detail in the ‘forced to hijack a plane’ section because it feels a little irrelevant and top-heavy by the end.

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