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Chris, an architectural intern falls for a mysterious woman named Samantha, but she seems to know a lot about him, maybe too much. Is he just overthinking or is there more to Samantha than meets the eye?
I feel this is more of a tagline, to get the audience interested. And I believe a logline shouldn't be a question (but the experts will have more to say).
I feel this is more of a tagline, to get the audience interested. And I believe a logline shouldn’t be a question (but the experts will have more to say).
See less20 years ago a team of scientists, led by a brilliant, but dying, astronomer, sent out a probe searching for intelligent life, now that life is searching for those who attacked their homeworld.
A brilliant astronomer returns back to earth after a 20year search for intelligent life in the universe.Only to investigate the unkown force that devastated his homeland.As he struggles with his own mortality
A brilliant astronomer returns back to earth after a 20year search for intelligent life in the universe.Only to investigate the unkown force that devastated his homeland.As he struggles with his own mortality
See lessWhen a descendant of Cain commits murder, the statue of Cain becomes alive to exact revenge, and the killer is…A child!
You have me with bringing in "Cain" but the rest makes me question. My first response was aren't we all children of Cain (within the scope of that story)? Cain, Able, and possibly Seth were the children of Adam and Eve. No children are mentioned for any of them, but only Cain has any mention of a wiRead more
You have me with bringing in “Cain” but the rest makes me question. My first response was aren’t we all children of Cain (within the scope of that story)? Cain, Able, and possibly Seth were the children of Adam and Eve. No children are mentioned for any of them, but only Cain has any mention of a wife and going off to live life (according to what I just looked up, forgive me if I’m wrong). Your story might address this, but here in the logline it makes me scratch my head. Second thing you had me with is the statue coming to life. However, and this might just be me, the fact the child is the killer doesn’t grab me the way it clearly is intended. I’m neutral on it. If I had this logline in front of me and the synopsis, I would read the synopsis, but I might not ask for one if I just got the logline. I don’t know what I need, cause I’m still trying to learn logline writing, but I know I need something more to fully nab me. Sorry I can’t be more helpful and say “it needs this!” Good luck!
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